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After the Fourth Great Shinobi World War ended, the world was experiencing a time of peace. The villages for once were able to live in relative harmony with one another as they rebuilt, and for once, all seemed to be well. The kage were able to live peaceful lives and soon began retiring, passing on the baton to the next generations. That is until an unknown virus infects the northern coast. The first to fall is the once powerful Raikage, Ay. While many thought this virus was a simple mutation of what may have well been the flu, no one would ever think of the destruction it would cause. Especially when it infected a certain Uzumaki Naruto.
With his death came the malice; with the malice came the destruction; with the destruction came the shinobi' revolt; and with the revolt came the sacrifices. The Bijuu became filled with malice that they sought to destroy the world. Shinobi sought a way to fight them and once again capture each of the Bijuu. Time passed, and a plan was devised. The Jinchuuriki would be sacrificed for the greater good of the world, and with the deaths of nine individuals, an uneasy peace began.
As time continued, the villages began to truly restructure. In a peace that would last 80 years after the downfall of the Bijuu, the world would see the creation of a great many things. Technology was beginning to take root and before long the blossoms that grew from the tree of the advanced mind would bear fruit. A many great things came to be. A railroad between the vast many nations. Mechanical limbs to replace lost ones. Radios that could reach between villages. Everything seemed to be becoming less reliant on the shinobi. Only the need for them never truly vanished. As with the growth of time, also continued the growth of malice.
Post by Yuki Orochisai on Jul 16, 2014 5:31:17 GMT
you came on like a vision in the dark
death is inevitable, suffering is an option
Orochisai Yuki
~Kyoya Hibari, Reborn!~
Alias: Yuki Orochisai.
Age & DOB: 24, 03/21.
Gender: Male.
Sexuality: Heterosexual.
Village: Da Bloody Mist.
Rank & Position: Jōnin; Squad 1.
Chakra Nature: suiton.
Chakra Manipulations: suiton and katon.
Appearance
At six feet and nearly four inches added, it is quite clear that Yuki is pretty grown. His weight is at one hundred and ninety three pounds with pure muscle hidden beneath the lean forms of his body. Despite the brown hair in and of itself, the hair is normally tied by into a lone ponytail where one can see his darkened eyes in and of itself as well. The eyes themselves not nearly like any of the other features he possesses, he uses a smile much the same as a devil would with a snake tongue of speech. His appearance itself is not much for wear though as he does have in and of itself a manner of appearing unlike any other within such times. The lazy appearance follows though, as his village headband is tied directly at his left leg where it holds a simple convenience.
From a young age, Yuki has possessed relatively fair skin; through the years however, it has become lined with scars and shifted to a light tan. Ebony locks cascade from the crown of this advanced shinobi, spilling into emerald pools as it continues down the back of his neck. Harsh eyes possess a natural fierceness that strikes fear in to those who stand against them; paralyzing the largest men with dismay. An average nose possessing a smaller bridge progresses down from the center of his eye, maintaining proportion with his slender facade. Beneath small and hidden nostrils lays thin rose lips, lightly tinted red from the blood flow to the area of his body.
The lack of broad shoulders is made up for in his striking distance; able to reach twenty-eight inches without advancing. An abundance of ripened muscles line his upper body, large veins visible upon his arms. The remained of his upper torso(pectorals, abs, and back muscles included) remains consistent with his arm, revealing him as very well built for a man of his size—lithe. Various tattoos mark this area of flesh with a plethora of "eye" of various art styles, this is used for confusion and has a purpose which will be revealed later.
Thin legs possess great power and acceleration; though lacking in comparison to one proficient in taijutsu. Beneath his crimson garments, he wears white boxers with vertical blue stripes. The kimono however, is simple though eloquent. It gives of a casual and fierce air, making him seem like a man of great professional skills. And while this apparel is quite suave in the face of customers, he also holds more stealthy and combat flexible attire for special purposes.
Yuki holds his body with great posture, body language depicting a great pride he bears within. He stands well above the average male, and will grace those he knows with a gentle smile. Anyone else who lays eyes upon the male would shiver out of fear for his merciless facade. Even with such a fierce countenance, his body remains tranquil, lacking of any and all tensions as he stands and moves about the world. This makes him very unpredictable, and would surprise many who face him with a fist.
When faced at the venue of bloodshed, Yuki is well prepared; using concealment to his advantage. All of his items usually lay tucked away beneath the red cloths, unseen to those who approach him. Even movements within the kimono such as hand seals are very difficult, if not impossible to see at a range no further than two meters. Any further, and one would have any chance of predicting his actions, giving him somewhat an advantage as an adept user of kenjutsu and taijutsu.
The appearance is dressed in a black and white Shihakushō, a garment similar to reapers of death, as this outfit stands out best with his appearance but over such an outfit is where the laziness comes in. The undone robe, properly a kimono outcropping, is worn on Yuki as it is designed as a cherry blossom kimono that is used almost like a blanket when he is napping with a straw hat over his head. Surprisingly enough he boasts a normal attitude about himself but the two large katanas at his body are worn directly at that small of his back. Where this is, appears hidden underneath the kimono in a normal everyday manner with his specialty sword at his hip, whenever it is not at the upper portions of his dojo where it sets directly behind his sitting position.
Personality
Yuki Orochisai, depicted by peers as a vigilante of the common man; revolutionary with the demise of corruption within his eyes. In the eyes of his adversaries, he is seen as cold and merciless, though he regards them as an obstacle to his ideal world — justifying their deaths to come. Violence retorts the concepts of religion, corrupt entities, unrighteous laws, and other oppressive bodies, strong adamancy fueling his motives. And while he fights for all, he also fights for personal reasons; attacking those who betray his acquaintance or seek to inflict harm upon his comrades.
His softer side comes from the womanly nurture of his mother before her death. He feels a strong sympathy for the weak and less fortunate, especially after having been born into such wealth. In some manors, he is the 'Robin Hood' of his time, taking from the greedy and giving to those deprived of enough to survive. Benevolence is demonstrated to both women and children, as well as the common man; he is one of the few remaining warriors to uphold chivalry.
Yuki is a man of his word, known to fight for the things he loves with great resolution. Comrades are those he trusts, employing in friendship regardless of decisions or appearances. Another thing he feels passionate about, is his liberty. Without freedom, then life isn't worth living; while Yuki strives to protect his own, he also struggles to preserve the liberty of others. With that in mind, he feels strongly about conserving the innocents of children; it is difficult for him to bare the death of a child or see one involved in combat at such a young age. Actively, Yuki supports artists and revolutionists around the world who continue to analyze politics and the truth behind a filtered media. It is an inspiration to him; he takes the most liking to abstract and surreal art. He is able to comprehend the ignorance of man and thus makes an attempt to educate those possessed with such unawareness. And when attempts to educate those lacking in knowledge fail, he makes a judgment on whether there life is deserved to continue or not; disrespectful attitude towards the male will bias him towards one's death.
Yuki is as internally complex, if not more, than his exterior semblance. He constantly battles moral, questioning the validity of his justifications, and his self made life purpose. Sorrow, although hidden, overwhelms the crow, for he cannot hold back the tears within for those who suffer at the blade of the greedy. As most teens, hormones have also swayed him to the topic of love, causing him to feel empty with the lack of someone to call his own. However, his primary sadness, which also results in insomnia, results from his mother's death; which felt as though the skies had rained down acid upon his soul.
History
The story of the boy who would become known as Yuki is a most curious one. The man was born Yuki Orochisai, a member of a proud Orochisai family during the time when a war was feuding between all the ninja nations, commonly known as the Seventh Great Shinobi War. Both of his parents were great shinobi within the island's fighting arm, and fight they did. During the Seventh Great Ninja War the two fought for Orokisai Zaku and his goals of ending the pointless war. The young Yuki would not have opportunity to inherit this goal within his heart.
By the time he was six the war was over and both of his parents were dead, killed fighting in the last major war of Kirigakure history. From here the young boy became a member of the Hirosho family. Yuki was a quiet, calm, introverted child with few intrapersonal connections to draw on for flavor and sustenance in life. He mourned the parents he never got to know and developed a deep hatred for the world for taking them from him. It went without saying that Yuki wanted to become the most powerful man in the world, due to the fact he had experienced so many things, he learned about inside jobs and betrayal at such an early age so that he may one day have his revenge on the world and whoever opposed Kirigakure. Two months later he was submitted to the academy and another two months later he was submitted to a special Kenjutsu academy.
His time within both academies was punctuated by excellence. Yuki had a drive, a hunger for knowledge that was insatiable. He wanted to know everything in order to become both powerful and respected. He would have to work for it. He graduated from the regular academy at the age of eight and graduated from the special Kenjutsu academy at the age of twelve. It was not until he was thirteen when he met his to be childhood sweetheart, Sakura Haki and his great friend, Fuutaro Haki.
Even with his friends the boy worked hard and busted his ass to make headway. His friends disliked his single minded dedication, but Yuki had a dark goal to achieve. Despite his most valiant efforts however, he quickly came across a disheartening bias. His friends and him were quite close and they talked a lot, Yuki and his friends would travel from one side to another in Kirigakure but despite his curiosity Yuki was forced to stay in Kirigakure. At first the kid became angry, but in the end this only solidified his resolve to excel and prove those that would look down upon him to be fools.
As weeks and months passed, Yuki started to train valiantly in the arts of both Taijutsu and Kenjutsu. He excelled in both and took down one opponent by another one at a time. His body started to get more ripped day by day, even when he was satisfied with his body he continued to train and work his hardest. With this specific training he started to get a speed and agility advantage over his opponents and also sort of a strength advantage. Yuki was fascinated with various swords and wished to collect the best swords in the world one day, starting with the ancient Seven Lost Swords of the Hidden Mist.
A couple of years after, just before Yuki's fifteenth birthday hell was unleashed on Kirigakure. The destruction claimed the life of his not-related-by-blood family and launched the the land into some dark times. The events that occurred within the island would eventually lead Kirigakure into yet another war but with only one land, Iwagakure, and this time Yuki would not be denied glory. Iwagakure ninjas were the ones who killed his mother and father. Using all of its assets, Kirigakure sent Yuki, Sakura and Fuutaro into battle with other lands at such young ages..
Though there were stumbles and staggers the three friends did well and learned from their mistakes. They fought enemies from both Iwagakure and Amegakure since they patrolled that area with an old time nationalistic zeal. It looked as if the name of Yuki Orochisai might have become the start of a new Kirigakure legend within the world. The boy's good fortune would not hold out though. In a particularly fierce battle within the mountains of near Iwagakure, his team was overrun by Iwagakure forces and cut off. Surrounded, they fought valiantly, but when all failed. Yuki was the last to go down, taking a kunai to the chest. While a horrendous injury, it did not outright kill the boy. Iwagakure had taken him captive in a temporary hideout within the mountains of Iwagakure, however, Kirigakure was able to find him and successfully bring him back to Kirigakure, alive.
With three years Yuki was back to his normal form but more havoc struck a year after his recovery. Ashaki Fuuto was sent by Iwagakure in their last attempt to wreak havoc in Kirigakure. Ashaki Fuuto was a skilled swordsman that had worked with the ANBU for twenty years. Once the swordsman he reached Kirigakure he almost immediately struck havoc on the area, destroying a whole dock of ships. He then entered the city and needlessly killed around one hundred fifty innocent civilians. It was not until he reached outskirts of Kirigakure when he met Sakura, Fuutaro, Yuki and about twenty other shinobi. Ashaki managed to kill two of the leaders of that group and cripple the last one. Out of the three kids, Sakura decided to strike first, she was a fist fighter and managed to hit Ashaki but not kill him. Fuutaro died but landed a crippling blow to Ashaki, it was not until twenty minutes later when Sakura could finish Ashaki, though, when it looked like Ashaki was a goner he managed to pierce Sakura in the heart with his sword. It was then when Yuki lost everything, friends, family, everything. A deep hatred and grudge brewed within Yuki, he managed to kill Ashaki but he could not forgive himself for letting Ashaki kill so many innocent people.
Now Yuki is a Jōnin and leads Squad One of Kirigakure and here we stop, the rest of the pages of the book are blank and will need to be written.
Combat Stats
Paths of the Shinobi:
Primary: Path of the Body.
Secondary: Path of the Soul.
Weakest: Path of the Mind.
Equipment:
What stuff does your character carry around? Link to any custom items here, and note where your character keeps them (on hand, in a bag, etc)
Special Abilities:
i. Kenjutsu Prodigy: From the time he became a Genin to present day, Yuki has trained in the art of Kenjutsu with all his heart. Yuki has been taught the ways of the blade by his teacher in both the Kenjutsu academy and his teachers after graduating from the academy. Even to this day, the teachings of those mentors are still wielded by the man, despite his occupation as a shinobi. Because of his extensive training with the use of his katana, Yuki has made himself known throughout the village as a swordsmen with skills few can rival. Against all those but the highest of ranked shinobi, the ANBU's swordsmanship is unmatched in strength, speed, and precision.
Powerful swings of his blade are capable of cleaving Yuki's blade through steel weaponry when enough force is used, even when unaided by chakra. Structures thrice as thick as the length of his blade can be severed from the sheer cutting power of his swipes, being able to cut down enormous trees and half gargantuan boulders with slight swings; an entire building has once been caused to collapse by his hand because of such a feat.
His speed and dexterity with a blade are also of high prowess, working in tandem with his honed reflexes to block, deflect, or attack targets as they come by. Even the shuriken within massive hordes of projectiles can be individually targeted and stopped with his speed, while he remains unscathed. Falling under this skill is Yuki's control over his blade's cutting edge, learning from past experiences that he lacked in such. With precise control over the actual performances, Yuki's cuts can range from splitting an opponent clean to simply grazing them with its edge, though the two strikes would look near identical to someone without a similar expertise in swordsmanship.
Lastly, as he grows more and more skilled with blades, as well as the creation of them, Yuki has become able to quickly learn the fighting styles behind most swords through their design and weight, picking up intricate maneuvers and wielding others' weapons a handful of seconds after picking them up.
ii. Body of a God: Yuki has made sure to keep his body in tip-top shape, even during the four years of prosperity in Kirigakure. If he was going to protect the few people who were still alive in Kirigakure, he needed to be at his best for when the worst would come; a sword is only an extension of the user, after all. To do this, he has created a strict training regime for each and every day.
As he trains with massive three hundred pound weights when using his sword, Yuki has earned a strength that is clearly displayed if one were to gaze upon his well-muscled body. The man is very capable of punching or kicking straight through a stone wall. With just the use of his arms, Yuki has been seen lifting and throwing rhinoceros-sized boulders off into the distance, shattering them against mountainsides. Over the course of eight years, Yuki has honed the use of his legs to the point that they could be considered lethal weapons all on their own, each twice as strong as a single arm. His strength makes him incredibly dangerous, even when he is without his prized sword, as his strikes can mean the end for most shinobi.
On top of this strength is speed to be reckoned with, being able to outmaneuver most shinobi who are not capable of keeping up with Taijutsu specialists as well. His powerful legs allow him to move at top speed without fatiguing himself entirely, darting in and out of an opponent's sights as he runs. As he is used to moving incredibly fast, the boy's senses are also honed to keep up with and trace movements of a similar speed, making him efficient at taking out speedy opponents. His strikes may be hard to read at the speed in which he delivers them, his actions borderline invisible rather than blurred to those who lack the senses to keep up with his top speed.
Lastly, the boy's constant training and pits against death have earned him a rather high pain tolerance, on top of a powerful supply of stamina. Yuki could be pin-cushioned with kunai after fighting for an hour, and he would still have plenty of strength to continue on fighting for just as long. Pain is nothing new to a seasoned warrior, especially one who wields a blade, as he is capable of taking even grueling damage without backing down from a fight.
iii. Chakra Control: Some shinobi, typically of high intellect (but not always) have practiced hard day in and day out in order to hone their control over chakra manipulation to its peak. These shinobi are capable of using the exact amount of chakra for any technique, wasting none during battle and tiring out less often. The most adept at controlling their chakra can even shorten the length of hand seals for certain jutsu.
Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switch Skill) Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Untying Skill) Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Skill) Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Skill)
“Let's get this over with, shall we? What does it take, I wonder, to earn someone's approval? A jig? A smile? Perhaps just spelling something right?
To begin with, at the top. “ you came on like a vision in the dark” needs to be repaired. Next, last I checked, Hibari carries a bird and a pair of tonfa, not a straw hat and a pair of swords. The ampersand needs repaired in Age & DOB as well as Rank & Position.
Following in description:
“Beneath his crimson garments, he wears white boxers with vertical blue stripes.”
Glad to know the design and print. God forbid he change those, we may never recognize him.
Now in your history, you have a few words overlapping your image circle. May want to bring that down a line or two. At the end of paragraph six, you have a double period.
Equipment: … You realize this is empty, right?
Jutsu: One of these babies has an underline and the rest don't, nuke it.
Jutsu: You still have space for one a-rank and one whatever-else-rank. You got all you need?