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After the Fourth Great Shinobi World War ended, the world was experiencing a time of peace. The villages for once were able to live in relative harmony with one another as they rebuilt, and for once, all seemed to be well. The kage were able to live peaceful lives and soon began retiring, passing on the baton to the next generations. That is until an unknown virus infects the northern coast. The first to fall is the once powerful Raikage, Ay. While many thought this virus was a simple mutation of what may have well been the flu, no one would ever think of the destruction it would cause. Especially when it infected a certain Uzumaki Naruto.
With his death came the malice; with the malice came the destruction; with the destruction came the shinobi' revolt; and with the revolt came the sacrifices. The Bijuu became filled with malice that they sought to destroy the world. Shinobi sought a way to fight them and once again capture each of the Bijuu. Time passed, and a plan was devised. The Jinchuuriki would be sacrificed for the greater good of the world, and with the deaths of nine individuals, an uneasy peace began.
As time continued, the villages began to truly restructure. In a peace that would last 80 years after the downfall of the Bijuu, the world would see the creation of a great many things. Technology was beginning to take root and before long the blossoms that grew from the tree of the advanced mind would bear fruit. A many great things came to be. A railroad between the vast many nations. Mechanical limbs to replace lost ones. Radios that could reach between villages. Everything seemed to be becoming less reliant on the shinobi. Only the need for them never truly vanished. As with the growth of time, also continued the growth of malice.
After forming a short series of seals, the user placed his hand on the ground, and the user can release a gigantic wooden dragon, they can be used to restrain the enemy, or for offensive purposes. The created wooden dragon can vary in terms of appearance, and it has a special ability, the wooden dragon can absorb chakra from its target, slowly disabling them to use any techniques
Mokuton: Yorozuami no Ki [Wood Release: Myriad Net of Wood] B-Rank|| NINJUTSU || MOKUTON || SHORT || OFFENSIVE
This technique allows Mizu to change his fingertips to the woods, the woods stretched from his fingertips using the chakra inside Mizu, the growth of the woods is fast, the woods would continuously split until it becomes net-like. The woods attacked the opponent, grabbed the opponent's limb, and give pressure to the limbs, crushing it apart if the time and the amount of woods enough.
Last Edit: Jul 15, 2014 19:48:52 GMT by Mizu Mazugi
Mokuton: Uddodoragon no Jutsu [Wood Release: Wood Dragon Techniques] As wood dragon is a canon technique, I'm going to ask that you reapp it as a universal technique. We'll file it away under the KG techniques. If you choose to do so, remember to reword shiz so it doesn't talk about Mizu and whatnot. Check the Naruto wiki, since I think you missed a couple things on this one.
Mokuton: Yorozuami no Ki [Wood Release: Myriad Net of Wood] So if he's changing his fingers into wood, does that mean he's going to lose his fingers if the wood gets cut off? If that's not what you're going for, I'd advise saying the wood just grows from his fingertips.
Make those changes as we should be good. Make sure you're keeping an eye on your grammar though, I'm seeing a lot of typos and a couple run-on sentences which tell me you aren't paying too close attention to your typing ^_^
Mokuton: Mokuryu no Jutsu [Wood Release: Wood Dragon Techniques] - I would like an idea of the dragon's size. We can guesstimate its length because of its range, but how does it compare in size to the average man? How quickly does it absorb chakra? Also now that I've looked into it, this technique is easily an A-rank in terms of power.
Mokuton: Yorozuami no Ki [Wood Release: Myriad Net of Wood] - You still didn't address my previous concerns with this technique. Also I dunno what's up with your grammar here, double check that. Read it out loud if that helps at all
